Oh why me, why me
With this big blue tidal wave
I won't last long. Swoosh!!
 


debbie oli
05/09/2013 2:47pm

i liked you poem

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Mrs. K
05/22/2013 10:53am

I noticed how you used an onomatopoeia with swoosh. I also saw how you used very descriptive words for the wave.

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